| Message ID | 20241121224604.12071-1-puthen1977@gmail.com (mailing list archive) |
|---|---|
| State | Rejected |
| Headers | show |
| Series | Slight improvement in readability | expand |
Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com> writes: > Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP" > > Signed-off-by: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com> > --- > Documentation/networking/eql.rst | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst > index a628c4c81166..4f47121323c9 100644 > --- a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst > +++ b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst > @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO > > Which is worse? A huge fee for a 56K leased line or two phone lines? > It's probably the former. If you find yourself craving more bandwidth, > - and have a ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems > + and have an ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems > together to work as one point-to-point link to increase your > - bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either > + bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either Grammar fixes are fine, but we have an explicit policy that certain things are *not* typos and do not need fixing. These include American or British spellings and, to the point here, the number of spaces after a period. Please do not submit that kind of change. Thanks, jon
On Fri, Nov 22, 2024 at 04:16:04AM +0530, Vyshnav Ajith wrote:
> Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP"
Two spaces afer a period is correct. Please do not "fix" this.
diff --git a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst index a628c4c81166..4f47121323c9 100644 --- a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst +++ b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO Which is worse? A huge fee for a 56K leased line or two phone lines? It's probably the former. If you find yourself craving more bandwidth, - and have a ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems + and have an ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems together to work as one point-to-point link to increase your - bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either + bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either side. @@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO the load across two or more Cirrus chips. The good news is that one gets nearly the full advantage of the - second, third, and fourth line's bandwidth. (The bad news is + second, third, and fourth line's bandwidth. (The bad news is that the connection establishment seemed fragile for the higher speeds. Once established, the connection seemed robust enough.)
Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP" Signed-off-by: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com> --- Documentation/networking/eql.rst | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)