From patchwork Tue Mar 26 07:34:01 2024 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Patchwork-Submitter: Markus Armbruster X-Patchwork-Id: 13603649 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from lists.gnu.org (lists.gnu.org [209.51.188.17]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C09F8C54E67 for ; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 07:37:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: from localhost ([::1] helo=lists1p.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rp1KK-0004ch-MV; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 03:34:32 -0400 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]) by lists.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rp1KI-0004bm-Rl for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 03:34:30 -0400 Received: from us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com ([170.10.133.124]) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rp1KG-0005LF-W5 for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 03:34:30 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=redhat.com; s=mimecast20190719; t=1711438468; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=7cvhyuLZWRhHsbufTQZAFmByIpflmzJNa6qgU3UkttI=; b=BfiOQNEEJ0yaYDKD5nUi4w5d8Emx4/x2Dy6vA6yIChANbcLpmDr/X7Ji3gIEPvYGe88K3p TOw/Z0gVavFynCEvYZlzukXlxOtZS8dPf6S/fSnQbG6gGTSFSNFfe4oGn6e2BYrLPmH3CS dcaR2/fdfkX7wn3+Cvr5DfY91TuldhA= Received: from mimecast-mx02.redhat.com (mimecast-mx02.redhat.com [66.187.233.88]) by relay.mimecast.com with ESMTP with STARTTLS (version=TLSv1.3, cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id us-mta-36-mQPUv9YgMr-lAyrQxTSf4w-1; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 03:34:25 -0400 X-MC-Unique: mQPUv9YgMr-lAyrQxTSf4w-1 Received: from smtp.corp.redhat.com (int-mx08.intmail.prod.int.rdu2.redhat.com [10.11.54.8]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by mimecast-mx02.redhat.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id ADD4E101A523; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 07:34:25 +0000 (UTC) Received: from blackfin.pond.sub.org (unknown [10.39.192.81]) by smtp.corp.redhat.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7370EC3E620; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 07:34:25 +0000 (UTC) Received: by blackfin.pond.sub.org (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 8A2B221E65ED; Tue, 26 Mar 2024 08:34:20 +0100 (CET) From: Markus Armbruster To: qemu-devel@nongnu.org Cc: peter.maydell@linaro.org, Peter Xu Subject: [PULL 01/20] qapi: Improve migration TLS documentation Date: Tue, 26 Mar 2024 08:34:01 +0100 Message-ID: <20240326073420.738016-2-armbru@redhat.com> In-Reply-To: <20240326073420.738016-1-armbru@redhat.com> References: <20240326073420.738016-1-armbru@redhat.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-type: text/plain X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 3.4.1 on 10.11.54.8 Received-SPF: pass client-ip=170.10.133.124; envelope-from=armbru@redhat.com; helo=us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com X-Spam_score_int: -21 X-Spam_score: -2.2 X-Spam_bar: -- X-Spam_report: (-2.2 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.065, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H4=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+qemu-devel=archiver.kernel.org@nongnu.org Sender: qemu-devel-bounces+qemu-devel=archiver.kernel.org@nongnu.org MigrateSetParameters is about setting parameters, and MigrationParameters is about querying them. Their documentation of @tls-creds and @tls-hostname has residual damage from a failed attempt at de-duplicating them (see commit de63ab61241 "migrate: Share common MigrationParameters struct" and commit 1bda8b3c695 "migration: Unshare MigrationParameters struct for now"). MigrateSetParameters documentation issues: * It claims plain text mode "was reported by omitting tls-creds" before 2.9. MigrateSetParameters is not used for reporting, so this is misleading. Delete. * It similarly claims hostname defaulting to migration URI "was reported by omitting tls-hostname" before 2.9. Delete as well. Rephrase the remaining @tls-hostname contents for clarity. Enum MigrationParameter mirrors the members of struct MigrateSetParameters. Differences to MigrateSetParameters's member documentation are pointless. Copy the new text to MigrationParameter. MigrationParameters documentation issues: * @tls-creds runs the two last sentences together without punctuation. Fix that. * Much of the contents on @tls-hostname only applies to setting parameters, resulting in confusion. Replace by a suitable abridged version of the new MigrateSetParameters text, and a note on @tls-hostname omission in 2.8. Additional damage is due to flawed doc fix commit 66fcb9d651d (qapi/migration: Add missing tls-authz documentation): since it copied the missing MigrateSetParameters text from MigrationParameters instead of MigrationParameter, the part on recreating @tls-authz on the fly is missing. Copy that, too. Signed-off-by: Markus Armbruster Message-ID: <20240322135117.195489-2-armbru@redhat.com> Reviewed-by: Peter Xu [Some typos corrected] --- qapi/migration.json | 63 +++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------- 1 file changed, 32 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-) diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json index aa1b39bce1..bebe9f71ba 100644 --- a/qapi/migration.json +++ b/qapi/migration.json @@ -809,16 +809,19 @@ # for establishing a TLS connection over the migration data # channel. On the outgoing side of the migration, the credentials # must be for a 'client' endpoint, while for the incoming side the -# credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. Setting this will -# enable TLS for all migrations. The default is unset, resulting -# in unsecured migration at the QEMU level. (Since 2.7) +# credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. Setting this to a +# non-empty string enables TLS for all migrations. An empty +# string means that QEMU will use plain text mode for migration, +# rather than TLS. (Since 2.7) # -# @tls-hostname: hostname of the target host for the migration. This -# is required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the -# migration URI does not already include a hostname. For example -# if using fd: or exec: based migration, the hostname must be -# provided so that the server's x509 certificate identity can be -# validated. (Since 2.7) +# @tls-hostname: migration target's hostname for validating the +# server's x509 certificate identity. If empty, QEMU will use the +# hostname from the migration URI, if any. A non-empty value is +# required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the migration +# URI does not include a hostname, such as fd: or exec: based +# migration. (Since 2.7) +# +# Note: empty value works only since 2.9. # # @tls-authz: ID of the 'authz' object subclass that provides access # control checking of the TLS x509 certificate distinguished name. @@ -1006,22 +1009,22 @@ # credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. Setting this to a # non-empty string enables TLS for all migrations. An empty # string means that QEMU will use plain text mode for migration, -# rather than TLS (Since 2.9) Previously (since 2.7), this was -# reported by omitting tls-creds instead. +# rather than TLS. This is the default. (Since 2.7) # -# @tls-hostname: hostname of the target host for the migration. This -# is required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the -# migration URI does not already include a hostname. For example -# if using fd: or exec: based migration, the hostname must be -# provided so that the server's x509 certificate identity can be -# validated. (Since 2.7) An empty string means that QEMU will use -# the hostname associated with the migration URI, if any. (Since -# 2.9) Previously (since 2.7), this was reported by omitting -# tls-hostname instead. +# @tls-hostname: migration target's hostname for validating the +# server's x509 certificate identity. If empty, QEMU will use the +# hostname from the migration URI, if any. A non-empty value is +# required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the migration +# URI does not include a hostname, such as fd: or exec: based +# migration. (Since 2.7) +# +# Note: empty value works only since 2.9. # # @tls-authz: ID of the 'authz' object subclass that provides access # control checking of the TLS x509 certificate distinguished name. -# (Since 4.0) +# This object is only resolved at time of use, so can be deleted +# and recreated on the fly while the migration server is active. +# If missing, it will default to denying access (Since 4.0) # # @max-bandwidth: to set maximum speed for migration. maximum speed # in bytes per second. (Since 2.8) @@ -1240,17 +1243,15 @@ # must be for a 'client' endpoint, while for the incoming side the # credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. An empty string # means that QEMU will use plain text mode for migration, rather -# than TLS (Since 2.7) Note: 2.8 reports this by omitting -# tls-creds instead. +# than TLS. (Since 2.7) # -# @tls-hostname: hostname of the target host for the migration. This -# is required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the -# migration URI does not already include a hostname. For example -# if using fd: or exec: based migration, the hostname must be -# provided so that the server's x509 certificate identity can be -# validated. (Since 2.7) An empty string means that QEMU will use -# the hostname associated with the migration URI, if any. (Since -# 2.9) Note: 2.8 reports this by omitting tls-hostname instead. +# Note: 2.8 omits empty @tls-creds instead. +# +# @tls-hostname: migration target's hostname for validating the +# server's x509 certificate identity. If empty, QEMU will use the +# hostname from the migration URI, if any. (Since 2.7) +# +# Note: 2.8 omits empty @tls-hostname instead. # # @tls-authz: ID of the 'authz' object subclass that provides access # control checking of the TLS x509 certificate distinguished name.