@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ Go (golang) bindings for libxl
### Linux device model stubdomains
-Support for running qemu-xen device model in a linux stubdomain.
+Support for running the qemu-xen device model in a Linux stubdomain.
Status: Tech Preview
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ Guest-side driver capable of speaking the Xen 9pfs protocol
### PVCalls (frontend)
-Guest-side driver capable of making pv system calls
+Guest-side driver capable of making PV system calls
Status, Linux: Tech Preview
@@ -1060,8 +1060,8 @@ This file contains prose, and machine-readable fragments.
The data in a machine-readable fragment relate to
the section and subsection in which it is found.
-The file is in markdown format.
-The machine-readable fragments are markdown literals
+The file is in Markdown format.
+The machine-readable fragments are Markdown literals
containing RFC-822-like (deb822-like) data.
In each case, descriptions which expand on the name of a feature as
@@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ in such a case this feature may be described as "Stable / Interface not stable".
Does it behave like a fully functional feature?
Does it work on all expected platforms,
-or does it only work for a very specific sub-case?
+or does it only work for a very specific subcase?
Does it have a sensible UI,
or do you have to have a deep understanding of the internals
to get it to work properly?
@@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ will they still work when I upgrade to the next version?
* **Stable**
- We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility,
+ We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility,
and to fix any regressions that are reported.
### Security supported
@@ -1200,7 +1200,7 @@ are given the following labels:
* **Supported, Security support external**
This feature is security supported
- by a different organization (not the XenProject).
+ by a different organization (not the Xen Project).
The extent of support is defined by that organization.
It might be limited, e.g. like described in **Supported, with caveats**
below.
@@ -1221,8 +1221,8 @@ Some features are only for HVM guests; some don't work with migration, &c.
### External security support
-The XenProject security team
-provides security support for XenProject projects.
+The Xen Project security team
+provides security support for the various projects of the Xen Project.
We also provide security support for Xen-related code in Linux,
which is an external project but doesn't have its own security process.
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ namespaces):
unshare(CLONE_NEWNET);
QEMU does actually use the network namespace as a Xen DM for two
-purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open vnc connections.
+purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open VNC connections.
#### Network
Signed-off-by: Bernhard Kaindl <bernhard.kaindl@cloud.com> --- SUPPORT.md | 18 +++++++++--------- docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)