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Wed, 15 Jan 2025 08:49:37 -0800 (PST) From: Bernhard Kaindl To: xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org Cc: Bernhard Kaindl , Andrew Cooper , Anthony PERARD , Michal Orzel , Jan Beulich , Julien Grall , =?utf-8?q?Roger_Pau_Monn=C3=A9?= , Stefano Stabellini Subject: [PATCH] docs: Fix spaces and capitalisation of proper nouns and abbreviations Date: Wed, 15 Jan 2025 17:49:32 +0100 Message-ID: X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 Signed-off-by: Bernhard Kaindl --- SUPPORT.md | 18 +++++++++--------- docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/SUPPORT.md b/SUPPORT.md index 2bc5bd81ee..9478b70b1b 100644 --- a/SUPPORT.md +++ b/SUPPORT.md @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ Go (golang) bindings for libxl ### Linux device model stubdomains -Support for running qemu-xen device model in a linux stubdomain. +Support for running the qemu-xen device model in a Linux stubdomain. Status: Tech Preview @@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ Guest-side driver capable of speaking the Xen 9pfs protocol ### PVCalls (frontend) -Guest-side driver capable of making pv system calls +Guest-side driver capable of making PV system calls Status, Linux: Tech Preview @@ -1060,8 +1060,8 @@ This file contains prose, and machine-readable fragments. The data in a machine-readable fragment relate to the section and subsection in which it is found. -The file is in markdown format. -The machine-readable fragments are markdown literals +The file is in Markdown format. +The machine-readable fragments are Markdown literals containing RFC-822-like (deb822-like) data. In each case, descriptions which expand on the name of a feature as @@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ in such a case this feature may be described as "Stable / Interface not stable". Does it behave like a fully functional feature? Does it work on all expected platforms, -or does it only work for a very specific sub-case? +or does it only work for a very specific subcase? Does it have a sensible UI, or do you have to have a deep understanding of the internals to get it to work properly? @@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ will they still work when I upgrade to the next version? * **Stable** - We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility, + We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility, and to fix any regressions that are reported. ### Security supported @@ -1200,7 +1200,7 @@ are given the following labels: * **Supported, Security support external** This feature is security supported - by a different organization (not the XenProject). + by a different organization (not the Xen Project). The extent of support is defined by that organization. It might be limited, e.g. like described in **Supported, with caveats** below. @@ -1221,8 +1221,8 @@ Some features are only for HVM guests; some don't work with migration, &c. ### External security support -The XenProject security team -provides security support for XenProject projects. +The Xen Project security team +provides security support for the various projects of the Xen Project. We also provide security support for Xen-related code in Linux, which is an external project but doesn't have its own security process. diff --git a/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md b/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md index 603491f24d..3be33adf6a 100644 --- a/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md +++ b/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md @@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ namespaces): unshare(CLONE_NEWNET); QEMU does actually use the network namespace as a Xen DM for two -purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open vnc connections. +purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open VNC connections. #### Network